W.A.L.T Make a pizza to share with the class
On the 24th of August I helped my brother make pizzas for dinner. It was pretty fun and tasted really nice. "Really nice ending" -Jamie (Little Brother)Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
W.A.L.T Make a pizza to share with the class
On the 24th of August I helped my brother make pizzas for dinner. It was pretty fun and tasted really nice. "Really nice ending" -Jamie (Little Brother)
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Lottie,
ReplyDeleteWow, your dinner looks amazing. Was it delicious?
I really love how you have followed a procedural writing structure. I have never made my own base before, is it easy to do?
Don't forget to add your brief summary (see my example for ideas).
I can't see what toppings you used, what did you use?
Hi Lottie, Awesome you made the base as well great stuff. Did you have fun making the pizza with your brother?
ReplyDeleteMelissa